African-American Pride

1. 2 Responses to “My African American History Essay on Booker T. Washington?”

2. By SarahLiz82678 on Oct 23, 2008 | Reply

   This is an excellent essay, very well written.

   Here are my suggestions:

   In the second paragraph you wrote face when it should be faced.

   In the third paragraph second sentence, you may try that Booker T saw this as an opportunity to better himself intellectually.

   In the third paragraph fourth sentence you wrote came the leading, when it should be it became the leading.

   In the fourth paragraph second sentence you wrote influence white northern philanthropists and had great recognition among blacks, you might try influence on white northern philanthropists which gave him greater standing with blacks.

3. By edbdab on Oct 25, 2008 | Reply

   I agree with the following answer. Beautiful handwriting skills. Keep up the good work.

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